Monday, January 02, 2006

MBoM

if I could open my mouth
wide enough for a marching band to march out
they would make your name sing
and bend through alleys and bounce off all the buildings
i wish we could open our eyes
to see in all directions at the same time
oh what a beautiful view
if you were never aware of what was around you

6 Comments:

Blogger justin said...

Reminds me of a Death Cab song. I like it a lot.

8:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Does MBoM stand for 'My Big Ol' Mouth' ??

Like it

1:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is this your poem? It's good; sounds like a song to me too. But I'm confused about the title, very abstract.

10:39 AM  
Blogger Mr. Mando said...

captivating, nice work. i'm with justin, i like it a lot.

11:23 AM  
Blogger Timothy said...

Thanks, guys. It's not mine. The title is an abbreviation for Marching Bands of Manhattan. It is indeed a Death Cab song. Also, pvimwja.

11:13 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

"Paul violently ill, many words just abbreviate?" What--who's Paul? Also, any particular purpose for the song? Or was it just for intriguing discussion.

2:05 PM  

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